Viemera – The Essence of Deceit [OOC] [Closed]
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Re: Viemera – The Essence of Deceit [OOC] [Closed]
Plague is interested in filling the role of the primary antagonist of this RP, Lord Udonis. He has been informed of the key events that will need to be followed for the sake of the story line. I figured that having another member running this character would do the same as having Digi run the Goddess by adding a new level of realism and personality to the character.
As long as there are no objections with you all, I would like to offer him this role.
As long as there are no objections with you all, I would like to offer him this role.
Loki- Guardian Ghost
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Sounds good to me! I've role-played with Plague before, and he has a great writing style. Plus, he's Plague, so he would be perfect to play a villain
Silvan Arrow- Global Moderator
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I'm totally for it. I've been wanting to RP with Plague and never have had the opportunity.
Digital Muse- Guardian Ghost
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I have no problem with adding another to our ranks but I have a couple reasonable conditions. Please excuse my eccentricities but it is a rare opportunity that a writer jumps in an RP that is this far developed. Your recommendations (Loki, SilvanArrow, and Digital Muse) is enough to tell me that he is a great writer so that is not the cause of my conditions. I would like to know what he thinks of the RP thus far and following are my two conditions.
1. Once he reads through the story I would like to know what he thinks of the RP story thus far.
2. Who his favorite character in the story is (exclude his) and tell us why.
I fell it reasonable that we feel he has read through all the work we have posted thus far and his assessment of it. And speaking of work I have been doing some on my upcoming post. Enclosed in the spoiler tag is what I have thus far if you want a sneak peek.
I don't have it done yet but I feel it important that you all know I am actually working on it even if life gets in the way sometimes. I plan on finishing it tomorrow sometime. We'll see how that goes but I am sure more work will get done to the post tomorrow.
1. Once he reads through the story I would like to know what he thinks of the RP story thus far.
2. Who his favorite character in the story is (exclude his) and tell us why.
I fell it reasonable that we feel he has read through all the work we have posted thus far and his assessment of it. And speaking of work I have been doing some on my upcoming post. Enclosed in the spoiler tag is what I have thus far if you want a sneak peek.
- Spoiler:
- "Are those words for me, then, Owen? Maybe you should explain it to me.” Raewyn said, “You promised to help us. This isn’t the way to do it.”
No this is exactly the way to help. You don’t know him like I have come to know him in the last few years. This man is ruthless and will not stop hunting us especially now he knows I dueled James.
“Maybe you should explain it to us to help us understand, James.”
There is no proper explanation for my actions. Only excuses and what I did is inexcusable.
“Perhaps it is time to lay your hand upon the table for all to see, Owen. If we are going to be fighting side-by-side in battle, you can’t have something as vital as your true identity hidden from your allies. There is no hiding it now that this man has exposed your secret.” Tsume said.
Your wrong monk. Now I have to silence him because you let them know we were connected. You should have seen what I was doing and made the right strategic choice. I must be the only one who can see strategy. Damnit.
“David would you mind starting this duel momentarily?” Owen asked.
“Not at all good man.” David replied, “I will be ready in about five minutes.”
“Thank you David.” Owen replied and then returned his attention to his new acquaintances, “Listen closely because I am only going to say this once. This duel must happen. Neither of us will rest until it does. If I survive I will tell you about my past if you must hear it. No one must help me in this fight especially if I am going to be killed. Consider this favor repayment for the help I have given thus far. If I do die and someone wants to avenge me please do it on a different day. I would want that duel to be a fair fight. Now I must be off and prepare myself. Remember do not get involved until after the duel.”
Owen walked slowly towards the expansive forested area north of the city. He rechecked his firearms and began remembering everything he could about his enemy. I have no idea of any his abilities but I know he has them because he showed up with no weapons. I saw him controlling mist which could be one of two things, weather or water. Unless he can manipulate minds in which case I am destined to lose. I don’t think that is the case otherwise he would have found me much sooner.
I don't have it done yet but I feel it important that you all know I am actually working on it even if life gets in the way sometimes. I plan on finishing it tomorrow sometime. We'll see how that goes but I am sure more work will get done to the post tomorrow.
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Re: Viemera – The Essence of Deceit [OOC] [Closed]
I think it's perfectly reasonable to expect a new player to read through the RP and get caught up on everything that has happened. Otherwise he would be writing blindly without any context. I'm also intrigued to see what his favorite character would be. We have such a diverse cast that I certainly would find it difficult.
In addition, I would hope that he would be just as committed to finishing this RP as we are, even though he's coming in later while we've been with this story for so long. I know we've all been in the boat at some point where a great RP dies because one or two people just drop off the face of the earth and never post. From what I've seen of Plague's writing and Loki's recommendation, I feel good about him joining. But I just thought I should put that out in the open.
In addition, I would hope that he would be just as committed to finishing this RP as we are, even though he's coming in later while we've been with this story for so long. I know we've all been in the boat at some point where a great RP dies because one or two people just drop off the face of the earth and never post. From what I've seen of Plague's writing and Loki's recommendation, I feel good about him joining. But I just thought I should put that out in the open.
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I also agree anyone new (especially an Antagonist) should know the story.
But, asking him to pick a favorite character? That's putting a lot of pressure on someone and may cause some hurt feelings (however unintentional).
An opinion on the overall story or some ideas for the continuing saga might be nice, though.
But, asking him to pick a favorite character? That's putting a lot of pressure on someone and may cause some hurt feelings (however unintentional).
An opinion on the overall story or some ideas for the continuing saga might be nice, though.
Digital Muse- Guardian Ghost
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Nice post, SunWolf! I love the delayed use of Owens ball lightening. This is awesome! I can't wait to see what happens now that time has been reversed.
Digital Muse- Guardian Ghost
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OK. I think I should throw up some notes on how Owen manipulates time thus far. At this time he can only do it around a single body so for example he regressed his body 3 hours before it was injured and the rest of time is normal. He isn't powerful enough to effect anything but a single body yet. He regresses time to heal himself or other people (when he figures out he is now a time manipulator since so far most of his new abilities work on a subliminal level). The whole pocket watch thing was to prove to Owen in the next post that he is truly a time manipulator instead of a regenerator plus the fact he only gained one ability instead of two. So yeah every character saw the fight and how Owen cured himself (subconsciously) and in the next post he is going to confess his past to his newfound friends. Just thought I would clear things up in case there was any confusion.
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Re: Viemera – The Essence of Deceit [OOC] [Closed]
Thanks for the notes, Sunwolf! That clarifies a lot of things about Owen's powers. I have a post started, but I'll finish it either tonight or tomorrow hopefully.
EDIT: Posted. Sunwolf, let me know if I took anything out of context or need to change anything regarding Eri's actions after the duel.
EDIT: Posted. Sunwolf, let me know if I took anything out of context or need to change anything regarding Eri's actions after the duel.
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Re: Viemera – The Essence of Deceit [OOC] [Closed]
Nope your post was just fine. Actually both posts were pretty awesome. I will begin work on the massive monologue that is Owen's past. (Yeah I don't have to put Owen/James anymore!) DM and Loki (I am guessing) want to post before I move on. If not let me know. It will be a while before I get the finishing touches on that speech because I have exam week next week. I don't think I will have much in the way of free time until the following week. Sorry for the delay.
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What's up with the last post in the IC thread? Do we know that guy?
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Disregard his post, I'll have an IC mod delete it.
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Thanks dude! Was wondering about that.
Sunwolf007- Wraith
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Yeah, I was all excited when I saw that we had a new IC post, only to find that random paragraph. I noticed that the same thing happened to a bunch of other RPs in the Casual section, so the IC mods will have a field day cleaning up all of that...
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Just letting you all know, I've cleaned up the spam posts. If it happens again, PM me and I will delete them again.
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Thanks so much, Shadow Moonseye! Kudos to cleaning this up so quickly!
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Has Plague decided to join? I hadn't seen any updates lately.
Digital Muse- Guardian Ghost
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Sorry its taking so long to get this post up. I had a lot of stuff come up and I do have 3/4 of it done and hope to finish writing it tomorrow. Figured I should at least post in the OOC to let you all know what was going on. Sorry for the delay.
Sunwolf007- Wraith
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No worries, I was actually going to ask if you were still planning on writing the next post just to make sure, but you already answered my question ^_^
Just as a quick little update on my end: I'm busting my rear end this week to get all my work done by Wednesday because I'm going out of town next weekend. Depending on how much I get done this weekend, I may be delayed in posting after Sunwolf's. I definitely won't be using my computer much next weekend.
Just as a quick little update on my end: I'm busting my rear end this week to get all my work done by Wednesday because I'm going out of town next weekend. Depending on how much I get done this weekend, I may be delayed in posting after Sunwolf's. I definitely won't be using my computer much next weekend.
Silvan Arrow- Global Moderator
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Thanks for the update Sun, I'm looking forward to what you have in store for us.
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Oh snap! I just realized that Viemera is officially over a year old!
Happy belated birthday, Viemera!
Happy belated birthday, Viemera!
Loki- Guardian Ghost
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Holy cow, you're right!!! Wow, I never thought I would be involved with a role-play for over a YEAR! This calls for a celebration...with emoticons!!!
But seriously, you guys have made this such an incredible writing journey, and I'm truly honored to have been with Viemera for this long. Let's keep up the great work!
But seriously, you guys have made this such an incredible writing journey, and I'm truly honored to have been with Viemera for this long. Let's keep up the great work!
Silvan Arrow- Global Moderator
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WOW is right!! That's awesome and we're still interested and moving!! Yay us!
Digital Muse- Guardian Ghost
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Well, I don't know what to say. This is only the 3nd RP that I have been involved in that lasted a year. I know I wasn't in since the beginning but still its a great achievement to continue an RP for this long. I agree with Silvan, you guys have made this such a great experience that I have to say that this RP is the best RP I have ever been involved in. I hope we get a chance to finish this RP and make it the first one I have ever completed.
On a side note I would have had Owen demand they leave right away but he is way to emotionally compromised to be thinking tactically so if someone would suggest leaving before they get attacked again that would be awesome.
This should be last round of posts for the Owen/James side story unless I think of something more for him to say or the others demand any other info. Thanks for putting up with my messed up style of leadership for an RP for a time.
On a side note I would have had Owen demand they leave right away but he is way to emotionally compromised to be thinking tactically so if someone would suggest leaving before they get attacked again that would be awesome.
This should be last round of posts for the Owen/James side story unless I think of something more for him to say or the others demand any other info. Thanks for putting up with my messed up style of leadership for an RP for a time.
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Re: Viemera – The Essence of Deceit [OOC] [Closed]
I got some free time tonight (amazingly), so I got my next post up before I leave for the weekend. Sunwolf, I had Eri suggest that they leave as you requested. And great job with the Owen/James side story! I'm kind of hoping some character development will take place between Jake and Eri soon so they can stop giving each other the death glare every other post
Silvan Arrow- Global Moderator
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Aww... I was getting used to the death glare! Has anyone heard from Loki? I was hoping that he would progress the story when he posted and was just in general wondering what was going on with this RP.
Sunwolf007- Wraith
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I assumed Loki was waiting for Quaker to post before continuing the story, but I also haven't seen Quaker around much lately. He's usually Johnny on the spot when it comes to posting.
*assumes dramatic pose* This calls for a SEARCH PARTY!!!!
Guys? You both alive and okay?
*assumes dramatic pose* This calls for a SEARCH PARTY!!!!
Guys? You both alive and okay?
Silvan Arrow- Global Moderator
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I'm here, I'm here! Work has been harrassing me with phone calls (Every single bloody day for the past three weeks "Can you come in on your schedualed day off/come in early?" So yeah, what little free time I've had I've been trying to catch up a bit.
Don't worry, if there is one roleplay I won't let die it's Viemera!
Don't worry, if there is one roleplay I won't let die it's Viemera!
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Good to hear that people still check the topics! And it is good to hear from you Qnuts! I look forward to your post when life allows you to post.
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