Re: The Broken World [OoC]

by Koi in the River Mon Oct 19, 2009 7:08 pm

Oh yeah, that was just fine. I didn't see any problems at all. And, if I were to assume what the actual splitting of the continents would look like, I'd say it resembled that vision. Well, minus the mysticism of the whole thing. Razz

by Battle Andrew! Mon Oct 19, 2009 11:12 pm

Working through my own current scene, and i am hoping to start moving towards someone else's country, but it's turning out to be rather...wordy...

Is this a problem? I've been doing it almost exactly like any other story.

by **Gadreille** Mon Oct 19, 2009 11:17 pm

I think your post is fine!

If you want to PM me your general idea on how you plan to come to Proherva, I can give one or both of my Dreamers some forewarning Wink

by Koi in the River Tue Oct 20, 2009 3:02 pm

Who says wordy is a bad thing? Very Happy

by osacredxo Thu Oct 22, 2009 1:41 pm

I don't feel my style is wordy enough. Razz

I don't know if everyone's waiting on me to post or not (since the ratio of posts is 1:3 between me and everyone else), and I don't exactly know how we're doing this since we're not doing the posting in order between us...but I'm not dead, I'm just nitpicking my entries waaay too much ^^; I should have one submitted soon!

I wonder how long this introduction "chapter" is going to go on...everyone's time frame is kind of funky and not jiving at all, which I know isn't required, but still. Battle Andrew, I hope you're going to speed up to jive with Ryona's story if you expect to meet up. Wink

by Koi in the River Thu Oct 22, 2009 3:20 pm

Don't worry, this is just MAJOR buildup. (At least, on my side it is. ^-^) And I wasn't expecting this to be in order.

by Koi in the River Thu Oct 22, 2009 10:16 pm

Oh yeah, and do you guys want me to hold out on the natural disasters until people on your end start meeting up? Or are you wanting me to sever the world into pieces sooner than that? > Smile

P.S., I have a plan for Esarai that will have her catching up pretty quickly, so don't worry about her.

by osacredxo Mon Oct 26, 2009 10:26 am

I say, surprise me!

by **Gadreille** Tue Oct 27, 2009 1:00 am

I'm trying to keep up with this, but I won't be able to post tonight...if I don't get a post up by Wednesday afternoon, bugger me until I post!

by Battle Andrew! Tue Oct 27, 2009 1:26 pm

One big post coming up, I'm just going to get to when i can meet up with someone. Anybody have any suggestions on who that should be?

by osacredxo Fri Oct 30, 2009 4:58 pm

Sorry guys, but I gotta drop out of this. Thanks for giving me a shot.

by Koi in the River Sat Oct 31, 2009 10:12 pm

Aw, I'm really sorry to hear you lost interest. Sad

by osacredxo Mon Nov 02, 2009 6:47 pm

It's not that I lost interest in the story, I just lost interest in my characters. Rather suddenly, it seems. If I could start over, that would be cool, but I don't want to throw anybody off.

by Battle Andrew! Tue Nov 03, 2009 10:02 am

I don't think it would throw us off, nobody's really met up yet. But with nanowrimo going on now, i think that those of us doing it will be a bit distracted.

by Battle Andrew! Tue Nov 03, 2009 12:50 pm

I'm actually thinking of taking what i did for this and using it in Nanowrimo, because I was into that when i was writing it, but can't get into anything new. and that is CRUCIAL.

by **Gadreille** Tue Nov 03, 2009 1:01 pm

Koi, where is your characters kingdom located? Would my characters feel the same quake as yours?

Andrew, do you know what the demon wants? What her purpose is? My dreamer is supposed to be a prophet, so the more info I have the better Smile

Sacred, you should try out a new character. If you still aren't into it, then drop Smile

by Koi in the River Tue Nov 03, 2009 7:26 pm

I agree with you, Ryona.

And Gatura is located on what would be the border of central-western Africa, and different lands may not feel the quake yet. This is just to get my character going since it may take her a longer time to get closer to anyone else's location being sort of out in the middle of nowhere and all.

by Battle Andrew! Wed Nov 04, 2009 11:56 am

Ryona Noel wrote:Koi, where is your characters kingdom located? Would my characters feel the same quake as yours?

Andrew, do you know what the demon wants? What her purpose is? My dreamer is supposed to be a prophet, so the more info I have the better

Sacred, you should try out a new character. If you still aren't into it, then drop

That demon pretty much just wanted to watch things fall apart, and then take advantage of the chaos by either victimizing people or gaining dominion, i haven't decided which. That's if he even shows up again at all.

by **Gadreille** Wed Nov 04, 2009 1:33 pm

Finally, I have posted! So, just to be clear, Proherva is north of you on the border of N. America and the jumbled mess between N. America and Eurasia. I decided it would be easier if Tomas actually goes there, but if you want me to send Takehnadon out to meet you I can cook up a prophecy.

Perhaps she and Tomas travel to Gatura? or perhaps a big battle between Gatura and some foreign country forces smaller bands to choose sides in order to try and survive? hm...

by Koi in the River Wed Nov 04, 2009 7:21 pm

Now there's an idea. Gatura will probably be on the lookout for someone to blame and allies that can be trusted, and in the meantime will find itself under a new ruling hand. That way, having to get into the actual palace (which would be quite the hassle) wouldn't be necessary for any of you guys' characters.

by Koi in the River Tue Nov 10, 2009 8:04 pm

I'm kind of waiting for another post from someone else before I do anything else...

by **Gadreille** Tue Nov 10, 2009 8:07 pm

And I can't post again, so...that leaves Battle Andrew or Sacred (if she's still in).

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