Etern & Rie OOC

[Eternity]

Riekon & Eternity.

All right hon, let's see. Medieval Fantasy is something I'm in the mood in right now, but I'm out of plot ideas. Do you have any? lol

[Guest]

Hmm Well, I dont really know whats really popular here. But im very good at making a plot and what have it if I have a few ideas.
What kind of midevil?
(If im roaming in the wrong directions, just correct me)

By what kind of midevil, I suppose:
Do you enjoy playing Royalty? Or do you like being a Higher class person, such as maybe a friend of royalty, their maid (thats not really higher class, but im thinking) A guardian, im not sure. What do you fancy playing?
I suppose.
Wow. XD

[Eternity]

I'm open for playing most kinds. I love the type of plots that have something to do with kidnapping, royal vs. low class, or some kind of worldly problem.

It all depends on the plot what I'm versatile enough to play. Though I haven't played royalty in a very long time... So I'd probably go with someone higher up in this if the plot permitted it.

[Guest]

Hmm.. I have an idea then. It'll be along the lines of : Princess is kidnapped and some one, or people, must save her. I have a good idea in my mind. I post the plot here correct?
Im going to start writing it now, I actually like what is going on in my mind.
We can adjust it if we must

[Eternity]

Sure, post it

[Guest]

Terrible terrible writers block, almost done though.

[Guest]

Looks short, but I suppose in my mind im not quite done yet, give it a shot and we can spin this the way we want

Two kingdoms used to be in eternal peace, trading with each other, and often having celebrations together, but one man ruined it all. A trader of both lands, A man named Valentado sent assassins to kill the Family of Renfrew years ago, and pinned it on the Kingdom of Carrick. Valentado stealing warriors and men and with certain solutions convinced them to work for him, and quickly built his own secret Kingdom north of the two twins (Carrick and Renfrew). And day after day he would send his men to destroy villages and take women from each Kingdom, leaving fake marking of each Kingdom. Which both fell for quickly.
Constantly in battle now the two Kingdoms rage in fury, Valentado no longer having to destroy or do anything, he sits back and sips on his drink, watching the destruction with a smile on his face.
Although no one really knows of Valentado but one man.

Kingdom of Carrick:
The King of Carrick is cruel and cocky. Having a son the age of 17 ready to marry and take the throne. The Kingdom often intrudes into the Kingdom of Renfrew and takes women and burns houses often, as Renfrew is gaining weaker as each day moves on.

Renfrew:
The King of Renfrew is more natured man, in his family he was the only son to survive an ambush which killed the his entire family. He spends many hours reading books and tending to his 2 daughters. He although is not as happy for not having a man to take the throne, he insists that his daughters have a better life than he. He is married to a gentle Queen who is shy and silent, usually taking her seat and saying nothing unless questioned.
The king also insists on having a guardian for each Daughter as the Kingdom of Carrick has been trying to assassinate the family ever since.

Plot:
Carrick sends a random large army to destroy the main village of Renfrew, were the castle resides. One princess and her guardian get away but are soon captured. Where The prince awaits. (Im not sure if I want to give it all away, but if thats how you guys roll)

I think thats pretty good for fresh out of the oven. I'd usually sit and brainstorm and revise over and over, it would take a few days.
Any ideas? Suggestions?

I dont know how exactly you guys do it, just this, or even start it off. But this is what I have to offer, unless you do it otherwise, do tell! I can also start it off if you wish.

[Eternity]

Hm.

I like it.

Want to whip up characters and begin? So I'll be playing the princess (obvious question, but want to make sure)?

[Guest]

Yes Ma'am, if that is what you wish to play, I was hoping you would.
I am your guardian. Im thinking about starting it to where we first meet and instantly a day after the attack occurs, Your last guardian dying by saving your life. If that is what you wish of course.

do you usually do:

Name-
Age-
bio?-
Other?-

[Eternity]

Sounds good. I'm making my sheet now. And that's perfectly fine, something simple. I'm also going to add appearance because I'm a pic-whore XD I just don't do pure anime pictures more often than not.

[Eternity]

Name- Delilah Ristian
Age- 17
Bio- [I tend to keep most of the important details for the roleplay, if you don't mind lol] Delilah was raised with her sister Diana within the Kingdom's walls, given the freedom to play freely amongst the courtyard of their castle and wander the streets nearby when their father escorted them forward. But then after the first attack, not too long prior current events, they were watched far more carefully. Each daughter was assigned a guardian; one trained in defense and top of the knights' listings with skills unrivaled in the kingdom. But as time passed, they too fell. Delilah begins, separated from her guardian alone, survival in her mind before all else...
Character Summary: Delilah of the daughters is the logical and strong-willed one, though she can come off as timid and sweet. Generous and gentle, the princess is the eldest, who is trained well in fencing but not in strong fighting. She loves horse-riding and is fast on her feet with long legs that give her the ability to run at great speeds. When the attack falls upon her kingdom, she finds that fear is her greatest emotion and she finds that trusting no one is possible. Alone she is, and she must stay- at least, she believes this for now.
Other-
-A fine fencer
-Fast runner
-Beheld her own garden in the courtyard where she grew white roses and tiger lilies
-Keeps a strange golden dagger hidden on her
-Generous and sometimes even gullible
-Carries many traits of her mother and shows no signs of spoiling as her sister does
-First in line to be married

[Guest]

Hmm It didnt show up XD

I'll let your mind explore on my characters dazzling looks, that and im rather lazy.

Name: Rayith Madun (Ray)
Age: 18
Male

Looks: Short black hair not passing my ears, usually kinda messy but not disgusting at all. About 5'10. Blue eyes, strong build. Wears a thin chain mail under a black tunic, tucked into leather pants and wears leather boots coming to the middle of the shin. (Clothing that is easy to move in.) (Maybe I will find a picture >.>)

Bio: By the age of 5 his family died in a burning of their barn, and his mother was taken. Soon after he was taken up by his god father who retired in royal guardian field and trained me ever since. The leather clothing was a trait his god father took pride in. It was different although compared to other guardians.

Other: Carries a broad sword with my god fathers name engraved at the handle, completely balanced and made perfectly. It has a red hilt and has a blue tint to it. And also carries 2 throwing knifes and a close up knife within one boot and on his belt.
Typically a very caring nature loving person. Never really had any friends there for he is shy but can open up. He cares for everything and actually cannot stand actually hurting some one, but if the time comes to it, the ability to protect is finest.
Other things I suppose you'll learn in time
(I rp in first person)

[Eternity]

If you rp in first person, would you mind if I did the same? There are very few people who roleplay that way anymore and I love doing so. I might be rusty, but eh!

And I'll create a link to the pic.


Princess Delilah

and would you like to start us off in the IC???? Pweez?

[Guest]

IC meaning In character I hope. I would love to start us off.




It has been a long time since I've ever seen the dirt outside of my own home. So fresh and untainted by padded feet. My father standing on the edge of the door step and my mother waving a good bye.
The wind was harsh against my white face, picking up loose bits of dirt and attacking me in the eyes. Or was it the fear that made me cry? Fear of failure.

The wind blew hard, but the skies were clear. The smell of faint turkey roasting in black smoke and the small sounds of those roaming about. The time of Trade, it crowded the large city. Dirt paths leaving signs of litter and feet. I stood upon a hill looking over the greatest thing my eyes could lay upon. The small huts had lines of smoke leaving the tips, and so many wagons with good piled upon them. The place is buzzing with life. And it was beautiful. I held a sack in my hand, with the little I owned in it. It was on a string, aloft on my right shoulder. As I began to walk down the large hill, stepping through wild flowers and hearing the buzz of disrupted grasshoppers. I closed my eyes and opened them again, hoping I wasn't dreaming. Such a place, I would of never thought to see.

I came to a dirt path and made it to a large 20 foot tall grey wall. Where a large door fit between, and two guards standing in their metal armory. "Excuse me, I will need a source of Identification". I scrambled through my bag and pulled out a paper from the King himself, asking for me. "Such a mere little boy, why would such a king ask for this.." The guard spat on the ground and waved his arm slightly. The doors opened "Enjoy your stay" He said with little care.

I walked through and looked around, I felt like a little ant in a large world. I walked forward and caught site of the castle. 'I suppose that is where I should go'
I walked through the city, pushing through the people crowding the way. The coughs of ignorance and the little voices groaning "excuse you". I made my way through although, I shifted my swords place on my back and looked toward the gate of this great castle. I closed my eyes and opened them.

Butterflies...

I swallowed the last bit of spit in my mouth down and looked around. The door remained closed. I relaxed a moment as my body had tensed so that I couldnt move. "Remember, no one is going to kill you" I whispered to myself, words of my father. Are they?

The doors began to open after a guard finally noticed me. I looked to the roses and flowers covering the grass of the castle. I then looked up into the large castle, which was no open waiting for me. "Whats takin kiddo?" An older man who opened the door looked to me. "S-sorry" I muttered and walked through.
"We've been expecting you, Go right ahead, keep walking, you'll run into a large golden door. Can't miss it unless your blind." He patted me on the back.

I nodded, simply stepping through this palace. The door began to close, with its loud racket it made. Screeching and grinding against the floor and the chains squeeking from lack of lubricant.

My shoes made clicks as I stepped over the perfectly polished tiles. I was so lost inside my mind that I didn't even notice the surroundings. And before I knew it, my forhead hit the golden door. It was so cool against my hot head. "The King is waiting"

I jumped and almost fell back. "Good L-" the doors began to open and I caught my breath. Inside would be the King, and hopefully the Princess I would guard.
Or maybe a big man who would go ahead and chop my head off now.

I looked within the room, it had a red carpet trailing into the room, and a large throne. Big statues every 10 feet that had large strong arms that held the place up. Beautiful carvings of strong men. Each resembling heroic figures that the people cherished. One of them, my god father. "Come."
I stepped inside, and instantly bowed. I felt the air brush against my back as the doors began to close and I was in this room, with the king. I walked forward and froze a good 15 feet before the King.

[Eternity]

Lol, I'll go make a new thread. Don't worry about this, but this is the OOC, so we'll keep all OOC stuff in this thread. In the actual One on One forum, there will be another empty thread. I'll post your stuff there and respond.

[Guest]

Sorry. Im beyond Retarded.

[Guest]

Delete that delete that, It'll make me look like an idiot!! XD

[Eternity]

Don't worry about it hon :3

The Savior & The Saved IC

[Eternity]

posted.

[Guest]

Do you always say when you post? Or was that just.. a helping hand for me?
If so: I posted.
Im pretty quick to post..specially when im online XD
Which I have to warn you, I have to get off soon due to the fact humans must sleep.
Why oh why can I not be alien?
I would stay up all night if I could, but sadly I have a few things to do tomorrow :/ But! Im still here, I'll give you a good 10 min warning or something.

[Eternity]

It's okay. And no, I won't always say I've posted, I was just saying it to help out lol. Oh, and posted lol!

[Guest]

I see! Ahaha. Well, Thank you very much!
Posted >

[Guest]

I apologize but I have to log off for now. I have things to do early tomorrow morning, as its one minute until 1am.
Im enjoying the roleplay, and I hope you are too. If not, Im always up for taking some advice or anything. Learning is always good.
Have a great day / Sleep. What ever it is you do

[Eternity]

When would you like the attack to take place? I left the morning up to you in case you wanted to make it a very early thing, like before the sun rose or something. Up to you.

[Guest]

Mm, I'll lead it. I rise around 4am and I smell burning and look out the window to see the place being attacked. Let me edit it actually, and add that.

[Eternity]

Ah, let me edit mine, I didn't see this by then lol. I'll fix it if you give me five minutes.

[Guest]

NOOOO its fine! wefnukwemfeijnowfkmelw
Lol, I adjusted to yours!

[Guest]

Ok, If you edit. I will change my post. DO not fret. Ahaha.
Its all good!
But if you dont edit, do reply to mine

[Eternity]

LOL. XD

[Guest]

I have to say, randomly as this may be: Your a fantastic roleplayer. I like how your words flow and how your pretty moving with them. Its nice to see
I enjoy roleplaying with you.
Ps. Dont worry about complimenting back XDDD

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