Re: Sephiris: The Price of Peace - OOC

[Kalon Ordona II]

I'm feeling a bit under the weather, you guys. Plus it's my mom's birthday. I am however still in the middle of making the post. I keep fighting for opportunities to work on it, but they've been annoyingly few and far between. *stops posting and goes to write*

[Digital Muse]

Aw. Hope you feel better soon.

I am also struggling to find some free time to write up a post for Mad Kate. But it WILL get done, god damn it!

[Guest]

Here is the very rough draft, Kalon, for the treatise on the moons. As of now, it is just an outline for the information to put into the treatise. But it needs more of an elvish tone still, as well as the elvish words inserted into some of it (or all of it if you want a complete elvish translation to accompany it), and the moons need to be named throughout, perhaps differently for every culture, perhaps not. And please let me know if I left anything of importance out.
Also, feel free to edit it and add or take away whatever you think is necessary.

Spoiler:

Edit: Wow...that is shorter than I thought. Yes...add more...

[Kalon Ordona II]

It's good, Silvone, but I'd like it better if it was more consistent in regard to point of view. It should either be pure information, or all should be worded according to the elves' perspective. As it is now, it seems sort of half and half to me.

Couple minor errors here and there, as well, but I know it's still a work in progress, so no need to worry.

All the information seems good, except I'm not so sure about the extra winds. The thing with the forests makes it seem like the winds get really strong. I'm not sure if it would go to that extent.

[Guest]

No...it probably wouldn't. I was kind of distracted when I was writing it, so my mind was going off in places it probably shouldn't have. And I noticed the same POV thing, I just didn't feel like editing it last night. If you want to have a go at it, feel free. Otherwise I will rewrite it again.

[Kalon Ordona II]

I would, but I'm still working on The Post. (It's getting pretty long.)

Edit:
Stayed up late to finish it. FINALLY!!!
Sorry it took so very long, everyone!

I've only had a chance to skim over all your posts. I'll read them in detail ASAP. I'll put it on the top of my online to-do list. ^^

Edit:
Just so everybody is on the same page (not that we're not, but just so it's been said), the shadow creatures are a widespread phenomenon. They may appear anywhere, but not necessarily everywhere. The locations are random, but the locations are also so numerous that the exact point of origin is more or less moot. They only appear at night. The tendency is to appear in numbers according to the level of resistance. They actually end up killing fewer people than one might imagine. The chance of survival against them, just off the top of my head, is usually somewhere around 60%-80% for each person.

Probably 30% of Telmar is visited by the creatures each night. Different cities may or may not have repeat attacks--one night after the other. It's random. If they do, it'll almost never be three nights in a row. Most people in the wilds, however, WILL have repeat attacks.

Edit:
There! All done reading! ^^

For Tuuli and Tuula, keep in mind the instructions I have for magic. They're in the first post of the OOC. Awesome characters so far.

Raptorman: I noticed a couple tiny errors, like one time there was a "Telmar" that wasn't capitalized. No worries, though. ( I was just about to type "I'm not picky," but then I realized that apparently I sort of am. ) Cool idea with the mace-y thing!

Great posts, everybody! xD

Was Stion going to make character summaries for me to put up for Tuuli and Tuula? If not I can do it myself, now that I've finally posted.

[Stion Gyas]

They were in the PM I sent you...

EDIT: I sent it again.

Digi: I hit a wall, if you want the post I can give it to you to work on. I also have to work on a post for Brenard/Z'ang.

[Digital Muse]

Sure thing Stion, PM it to me and I can add to it.

[Stion Gyas]

Awesome, sent.

Silvone: I will begin work on the next post, unless you wish to have some interaction with Simion. Let me know.

[Guest]

No, go ahead with the next post. I will fill in anything later. It won't be anything that changes their course of action, at least not right away. So do whatever. I mean, I could step in with a short post, if you'd like, so we can get it out of the way, but that is up to you. I'm fine with waiting if you are.

[Stion Gyas]

I will begin writing, then.

Plan for the next post:

1. Set camp
   
2. Simion returns
   
3. Beastie attack
   
4. Magical phase to next day
   
5. Set out
   
6. Magical phase to Z'ang (As a post, not as us meeting him.)
   

Edit: We still have two days until we meet Z'ang. About fifty miles to go, at 25 - 30 miles a day.

[Kalon Ordona II]

Man it going to be awesome as the story continues to develop. Further on, all our characters will probably eventually meet up, like as the REAL chosen. There could be many more besides our characters, too; not really sure yet.

[Guest]

I think it would be interesting to have a few other characters how up that we hadn't known about, other Chosen, so that we have to find a way to incorporate them into the story. It will make it feel more realistic, like the story is alive beyond our own characters. Just my opinion.

[Kalon Ordona II]

Exactly. We could even start doing that BEFORE we actually get to Sephiris. And then some more afterward, as well. xD

[Stion Gyas]

Would we need to do sheets, or would they be NPCs?

[Kalon Ordona II]

They'd be NPC's, and like th--

OMG THAT SANTA HAT IS AWESOOOOME!!!!!!!!

[Stion Gyas]

Old tradition from Taleworlds forums.

EDIT: Your guy's head is shaped funny, or something. The hat doesn't look good on him. xD

EDIT 2:
Mad Kate:


(Perfect fit, I'm happy with the shape of her head.)

Sir Camlin:


(Looks absolutely amazing in a santa hat, by the way. Consider adding to your profile.)

I-forgot-how-to-spell-his-name:


(It's his ear... kinda sticks out. )

[Reffy]

HAHAHAHAHA!
OMGosh! Those hats are most awesome! Maybe I should get my Chibi Succubus back and have you put one on her too!

In fact ... yes! Please can you up a hat on my Succubus, Stion?

[Stion Gyas]

Here you go:



I had to paint over part of her bangs... but otherwise she's normal.

EDIT: I'll keep them on my account until well after the holidays, so no need to transfer them about.

[Kalon Ordona II]

Ahahahaha! Now I'm an elfy dude with a shiny hat! xD
This is hilarious, and festive, thanks to my green background. ^^

Thanks, Stion!

[Reffy]

Here you go:



I had to paint over part of her bangs... but otherwise she's normal.

EDIT: I'll keep them on my account until well after the holidays, so no need to transfer them about.

Thank you sooooo much! Tis totally awesome! Going to upload her now

[Kalon Ordona II]

Now it's gonna be: All the COOL kids have one! xD

[Stion Gyas]

See!? His ear is sticking out... But the background has too much happening to make a good edit.

[Kalon Ordona II]

Aww it's fine, Stion! ^^
Actually, hang on... I'll see what I can do on my own.

Edit:
There we go. Check out the avy NOW!!

[Stion Gyas]

I can't believe I didn't think of that! O:

[Guest]

Yeah...I logged on and Ryona says "did you see your avatar?"

And I'm like "uh...yeah...what?"

[Stion Gyas]

I've barely even started with my post, Silvone. Apologies. I've been driving about, from home, to the high school, to college, collecting signatures, papers, and books.

EDIT: I'll work on it today, and finish it tomorrow (A day off, at last.). So, hopefully, we can get moving again.

[Digital Muse]

I have to apologize guys, between a flying trip home to Wisconsin and a sinus infection....I was down for the count for a week. I'll work on a twins and a Katerina post soon.

[Stion Gyas]

No wonder it took so long for you to find your hat! It's a good thing you're better, though. I still have the first half of the twins post, if you need it.

[Digital Muse]

I have it Stion, thanks.

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